unit 1 reflection

1. I feel I was really successful in the body paragraphs. I believe I did really good in the body paragraphs where I described the days at tryout.
2. I believe the hardest part was the end. The last part was really hard for me because I am not good at closing the whole essay with a good conclusions.
3. The peer review was really helpful. My partner corrected a lot of my first paragraph. He told me that I was repeating a lot of sentences.